Start with the reader’s task

Online messages often compete with other things for a reader’s attention. Whether you are sending an email to a colleague or posting a community update, begin by asking what the reader needs to know and what, if anything, they need to do. Put that information near the top. A message about a changed meeting time, for example, should state the new time before explaining why it changed.

A useful opening answers the basic questions: What is happening? Who does it affect? What is the next step? If the message does not require a response, say so when that might otherwise be unclear. This approach helps people who are reading quickly, using a small screen, or returning to the message later.

Choose familiar words and direct sentences

Plain language is not about removing useful detail. It means expressing that detail in words your intended readers can readily understand. Prefer “send” to “submit a transmission” and “use” to “utilize.” Explain abbreviations the first time they appear, unless you are confident every reader knows them. If a technical term is necessary, give a brief explanation alongside it.

Keep sentences focused on one main idea. Say who is doing what when you can: “The library will email your confirmation” is clearer than “Confirmation will be emailed.” Be specific about actions and timing rather than relying on phrases such as “as soon as possible.” When a deadline matters, give the actual deadline in the message. Before sending, read the text aloud; a sentence that is hard to say may also be hard to follow.

Give the message a clear shape

Readers should not have to search through a long introduction to find the point. Use a subject line that identifies the topic, such as “Workshop registration details,” rather than “Important information.” For a longer message, group related details under short headings. Put instructions in the order people will carry them out, and keep background information separate from the action required.

Short paragraphs also make a message easier to scan without stripping away context. Include essential information in the message itself instead of placing it only in an attachment or image. If you share a document for additional detail, tell readers what it contains and whether they need to open it. This gives people a clearer choice about where to spend their time.

Write links that explain where they go

A descriptive link tells readers what they can expect before they open it. “Read the workshop schedule” is more helpful than “Click here” or a pasted string of characters. It also makes sense when someone encounters the link without the surrounding sentence. Avoid using the same link text for different destinations in one message; readers should be able to distinguish their choices.

Link text can also set expectations about the format or action. “Download the registration form” suggests a file, while “Open the registration page” suggests a web page. If a link leads to an outside organization or a sign-in page, mention that when it would be useful to know. Keep the linked words concise but meaningful, and check the destination before sending so the label matches what readers will find.

Make a final check from the reader’s point of view

Before publishing or sending, look at the message as though you have no background knowledge. Can you identify the main point from the first few lines? Are dates, times and next steps unambiguous? Does each link describe a distinct destination? If you mention an attachment, is it actually included? These checks catch small problems that can otherwise lead to unnecessary questions.

For messages shared widely, it can help to ask someone unfamiliar with the topic to explain what they think the message means. If their answer differs from your intent, revise the wording rather than assuming readers will work it out. Clear communication is an ongoing practice: make one useful change at a time, and keep the reader’s task at the center.

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